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Rated: E | Poetry | Romance/Love | #1513584
A romantic love poem dedicated to a special someone.
The way she walks, so smooth and airy,
Swaying gently from side to side,
Each stride finding
Firm footing in slightly
Elevated heels, making everyone stop
To appreciate her natural beauty and style.
Her fashionable, richly-hued blue jeans
Cover her delectable, shapely posterior –
Her lovely, stylishly made-up face
Has an inspiring, natural look
Of superb class and impeccable,
Tasteful quality. 
We exchange casual glances at one another
As we make another happy, stored-filled
Trek to the mall,
Looking for unbeatable bargains
And other gorgeous goodies.
The weather is alarmingly cold
And the ground wet from precipitation,
But we are comfortable, warm,
And invigorated in each other’s cozy,
Physical proximity. 
As we enter the warmer, dryer spaces
Of the huge shopping mall,
We are enjoying the richness and vibrancy
Of our loving and forever truthful relationship,
And the joys and dreams
Of being together forever…
© Copyright 2009 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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