Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Sponsored Items

Click Here To Bid  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 237    
Guests: 1086    

   
Total Online Now: 1323    
Writing.Com Time

Tuesday
May 29, 2012
4:07am EDT


  >> Static Item >> Sample >> Fantasy >> ID #1513939  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Forest
The opening of a new short story- Looking for feedback. Thanks
Rated:
E
by
This item has no ratings.
The walk through the forest yielded sights and smells that aroused the senses. Straw berries as big as my fist weaved through the greens at the base. Wild Spanish moss webbed the canopy, dotted with tropical birds above its crest. The path below was crunchy, a little loud for a quiet walk in the trees. The noise was welcome though, without it there would be nothing to compare the silence to. Animals were seen but not heard. How they managed to avoid the noisy crunch was a mystery. Maybe they just avoided the path? Up ahead a stranger rests on a fallen tree. He was wearing a McDonald’s crew uniform, the old kind woven with orange polyester cloth. He smelled like French fries. "Out for a walk today my friend?" He said to me. "No, actually I am taking a nap right now; you are lounging in my dream". I said. "my apologies, I don't mean to trespass, I will leave if you want me to. It is your dream" the stranger said. I was not sure how to respond to this, it was my dream after all. Do with it what I like, that is a choice cherished by those who drift away in slumber. However, he is my creation. His presence available for some reason. Better to keep him here in the woods. "No, I suppose you are here for a reason, stay where you are." Upon my request, he began to fade from sight. Right before my eyes. As the stranger slowly melted, a glimpse of his face caught my eye. A familiar face it was. Uncanny how I had possibly met this person before. In another time? Another place? Before the thought was over, the stranger was gone. Kind of odd, I thought. It is a dream.
© Copyright 2009 nolimit67 (UN: nolimit67 at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
nolimit67 has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!