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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Tragedy >> ID #1514774  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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Probably During a Sunny Day: the first version of the piece.
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Some kid’s mother, on the beach with shielded sun eyes; gazed at every sound.
Her hearing gauged distance like a hawk finding prey.
Her blind eyes cried remembrance with playful splashing.
“Don’t play too far out.”
Her head never turned away, not once.
It’s hard to hear a playful splash crashing beneath other sound waves.


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