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Translated in Color
Probably During a Sunny Day: Translated with a colorful analysis. Literally!
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this is more for me than anyone else and I'm not asking for anything other than understanding. No one understood my 55 wordier because I wrote it in a very complicated way. Even though your suppose to write things so people understand them easier I rather be a pain at times. (it's sort of a way I like to get back at the world because I read extremely slowly about twenty pages an hour. my brain processes things much different hence a documented learning disability. however, when I read something it's processed slowly but I have a weird interpretive nature that's highly intense and critical with imagination which is why I understand very abstract writing and only have to read it once. I guess there's a plus) Anyway, Enjoy the translating or decoding. It's in color. Kickass.



the color legend of missed things:

the mother is blind.
the child is actually represented as playful splashing and playful splash.
the child actually drowns
I make a remarked about this happening in society to non-blind people are seen as being blind.




Probably During a Sunny Day.


Her sightless eyes cried remembrance at playful splashing.
A mother on the beach with shielded sun eyes gazed at every sound.
“Hunnie, Don’t play too far out.”
Her hearing gauged distance like a hawk finding prey.
Her head never turned away, not once.
It’s hard to hear a playful splash crashing beneath other sound waves.


sound waves- is also representing the physical form of the waves (I didn't try doing two colors at once).

gauged distance like a hawk finding prey.-this is the mothers justification that she can bring her kid to the beach.





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