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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1523895  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Phantom Love
Pantoum Form - Absent Love
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                             Darkness floated and the day became night.
                             Shadows erased, merging into my mind;
                             What was bright dulled, what were two became fright
                             And without day, time began to unwind.

                             Shadows erased, merging into my mind.
                             Non-ending night blanketed me in black,
                             And without day, time began to unwind
                             Giving rise to my fear of looking back.
.
                             Non-ending night blanketed me in black,
                             I looked here and there but you were nowhere
                             Giving rise to my fear of looking back
                             Into the emptiness of my despair.

                             I looked here and there but you were nowhere;
                             What was bright dulled, what were two became fright.
                             Into the emptiness of my despair
                             Darkness floated, and the day became night.


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