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Hi username
My name is Ken and it is my pleasure to both read and comment on your work. Please note: This is the typical caveat about how these are my impressions. Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It doesn't matter what I say - of course you'll take this personally First impression: Generally, I like to take in the "whole" poem - what's it about? This is what I base my review on. I've read poems (written a few too Creativity: What makes this stand out? A form, imagery, or something else? Content: Did you get your idea, emotions, images across? Technical Notes: The mechanics - did you follow the form, spelling, puncuation. Overall Rating: Keep writing! Wishing you all the best, Ken ![]()
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