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Rated: E | Poetry | Friendship | #1528605
"I want to wipe away the tears and the hurt"
Can someone please review this for me? I have not written in quite a while, and really need to improve. I eventually want to give this to someone, which is why I want to make it as good as possible. :) Thanks.

I want to help you,
but your miles away.

I want to hug you,
and say that everything will be ok.

I want to pat you on the shoulder,
and say 'job well done'.

I want to wipe away the tears and the hurt,
and replace it with laughter.

I wanted to tell you how much I care,
and to show you how much you mean to me.
I wanted to make you feel ok again-
to wipe away all the frustrations and fear.

I wanted to let you know I still think about you,
even though you're miles away.
I wanted you to know you're still my best friend,
and, in my heart, you're my sister.

I wanted to help you,
even though you're miles away.
So I wrote this poem that you would know:
My arms are open should you ever need them.



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