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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1533680  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Lover So High
A love poem dedicated to my special girlfriend.
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A pulse so rapid like gazelles
Fleeing to safety from a ruthless pack of carnivores
In the deadly daytime of another
Seamlessly calm, but wild continent;
A unique lover of regal lust and passionate departures.
But whether needing a lover or being incapable of
Sweet, lengthy, pulse-pounding rapture at the moment,
Hers is the face of a longtime, romantic, and gifted friend,
And hers is the treasured identity
Of many years of kindness and sacrifice
Deeply embedded in the torrential banks
Of a hard-driving, rushing river –
A lover so high that nature and clouds
Cannot reach her precipitous, earthly,
And momentous heights…

Her hands have founded a legacy of giving and care
So blessedly and proudly placed
In my willing and open hands;
I am uniquely gratified by her open, trusting,
And heartfelt love for me!
© Copyright 2009 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Tim Chiu has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
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