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part one:

I didn't think this was difficult at all. However, I don't like the way it looks. Too choppy, not clean and precise. It actually looks like my notebooks!! Yes, I do think I would like to write further about the salon itself, could be an interesting short story.

part two:

The easiest sense was sight...it is very easy to describe. The most difficult was taste. I kept wanting to say it tasted like.....  Smile
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