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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1537247  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Pathetic. Loser
A very short mood piece on depression
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Avg Rating: (3)
pathetic.
loser.
pathetic.
loser.
the water talks in drops
pathetic.
loser.
i take a breath
my head goes under
drowning
in a sea of oh why me's
pathetic.
loser.
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