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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1541972  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Path Apart
A response to Ben Langhinrich's poem "A Path to You"
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And so my path led once again to you,
My heart a-beating thunder in my chest,
Crying out for that soft touch anew
Upon the cage that trapped my love’s unrest.

And so I came once more, my love the waif
Of yours, which once with mine was intertwined;
But when I see your eyes I see them strafe
And crush my hope that your love I would find.

My path had turned back from stolidity
To go back to the groves of unimpeded
Love for you, but now I see futility
Is my path’s name, and I’m for you unneeded.

As presence shows, two hearts that grow apart
May not always return to single heart.



*Shakespearean sonnet in iambic pentameter, abab cdcd efef gg rhyme scheme.

*Written as a response to "A Path to You"   by Ben Langhinrichs-quiet
© Copyright 2009 Andrew C. Bowman - 6 years! (UN: casuconsulto at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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