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An Extraordinary Day - segment 02
Chapters 06 thru 10
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Chapter 06

Trusting the friendly smile of her partner, Susan followed and joined him on the sofa. Jeremy immediately moved his larger body closer to her. He began her education by placing her hand against the thick bulge trying to escape from his shorts. “Feel that?” Seeing her tiny nod, Jeremy felt relief that she was showing only curiosity.

After moving even closer so they sat hip to hip, he confided, as if it were a secret he wanted to share only with her, “I’ve never taken a virgin before, so I want you to feel comfortable with my body first.” He gently wrapped her fingers around his arousal, letting her experience its heavy shape through his cotton shorts. ‘Have you ever held a man like this before?”

Susan didn’t answer, fascinated by the feel of what Jeremy kept hidden from her. She raised her head and looked shyly up at his face. She became nervous again at seeing his pained expression. “Am I doing something wrong?” Without realizing how this made Jeremy feel or even what she was doing, her fingers had tightened around him and were moving up and down his cotton–shrouded penis. When he pushed her hand away, she wanted to cry in embarrassment.

Jeremy immediately slipped out of his shorts and tossed them to the floor. “Here, this is much better.” When she reached for him, Jeremy stopped her hand inches from his swollen penis. “No, not yet.” He leaned over and placed his hands at the waistband of her panties. “Let’s see what you’ve got under these first.” Tugging the material down, he exposed her dark patch of pubic hair. “Lift yourself up, Susan, or I’ll have to rip these off. Hurry up!”

Susan obeyed his command as fast as she could, but he ripped her panties off anyway. She gasped in shock when he put a hand behind her back and moved it down to fondle her bare ass. “What, no, don’t…” Susan stopped complaining when Jeremy removed his hand. “Thank you,” she whispered, just before he tenderly placed her face down on the sofa and pulled her legs up behind where he was sitting.

With Susan in this position with her round cheeks so close and tempting, Jeremy gently slapped the one closest to where he sat. He knew he hadn’t hurt her, but was pleased by the sound this made. Jeremy gave her ass another slap, this one a bit harder. A third slap, the crack of his open palm on her soft flesh sounding loud in the room. He quickly followed with more, each harder than the last. Jeremy watched Susan’s ass turn red, but was pleased when she only squirmed whenever he struck her. This showed she might accept even more pain from him, as long as he didn’t cross the line into a beating. Jeremy wondered if she would be as good at dishing out punishment. He reluctantly moved on.

Determined to prolong Susan’s initiation into sex, Jeremy began by running one long finger down the crack between her cheeks. “It’s going to be all right, just relax and stop wiggling so much.” I just need to keep reminding myself she’s still a virgin and have to go slow.

He slowly inserted his middle finger and began rubbing the soft skin inside her tender rectum. “You’ll like this, just give it time,” he promised. Trying to ignore her impotent struggling, Jeremy knew she’d thank him when they were done. His arousal was getting more painful by the moment. I just hope I can hold on for a bit longer.

Chapter 07

When he felt Susan comfortable enough with his initial gentle touch, Jeremy knelt on top of her and held her firmly in place by straddling her legs. He pushed a second finger in with the first and started moving them harder, faster, and deeper into Susan’s wildly wiggling ass. “Yes, you like this, don’t you?” The sofa cushion pushed against her face muffled Susan’s answer, but Jeremy hoped he was making her happy. “That’s it. Move around all you want. Push up further and help me out. Good girl, that’s it. You’re doing just fine.”

With two fingers of one hand deep in ass, Jeremy leaned down so he could slide his other hand underneath her squirming body. When his fingers touched the opening to her vagina, he tried to slow down. Jeremy knew he was reaching the end of his control, but also realized Susan needed more time before he tore through her hymen.

“Please stop, you’re hurting me.” Finally able to move her head out of the cushion, Susan looked up at him while tears streamed down her face.

Hearing this, Jeremy immediately removed his fingers from her body. His intention had been to give Susan pleasure during her first time with a man. Jeremy suddenly realized she was still too inexperienced to understand that pain sometimes increased a person’s sensual pleasure. “It’s going to be okay. I won’t do that again. You still hurt?” Jeremy smiled at seeing Susan’s timid nod. “Do you want me to kiss it and make it feel better?”

Susan felt him moving further back on her legs before he leaned down and kissed her sore ass. He soon followed this by licking first one cheek and then the other. When she felt his wet tongue getting closer to where his fingers had been, she tried to steady her ragged breathing.

Jeremy raised his head upon hearing her panting. “You like this better? Oh yes, you do,” and he returned to where he’d left off. His tongue swept around and around, but didn’t enter. Jeremy didn’t want to cause her more pain there, at least not yet. Soon he felt her beginning to move restlessly under him, and he knew she was ready for more.

At that point, Jeremy got off Susan’s legs and sat down once again beside her. “Why don’t you roll over? Much as I like your ass, I want to see your pretty face.” He helped her reposition herself on her back, but made sure she couldn’t get past him and off the sofa. “Has anyone ever told you what a beautiful body you have? No? You mean, no man has touched you here,” placing his right hand on her pubic hair, “or done this?” Jeremy traced his fingers down until he came to the slit at the entrance to her vagina.

Susan turned her head away from him, not wanting Jeremy to see how much she enjoyed his touch. When his fingers started rubbing that sensitive area, she shyly opened the space between her legs in silent invitation for him to continue. Susan felt his fingers moving faster and harder, and she couldn’t keep her body from moving restlessly on the sofa.

Unable to resist what Susan was offering him, Jeremy gently slid his middle finger through her slit and began stroking the tender flesh inside. He knew Susan liked the feeling when she raised her hips to get closer to his active finger. He soon began probing around in search of the pea-size nub usually just inside a vagina’s entrance. Jeremy took his time to prolong Susan’s growing excitement, but eventually his tip of his finger found it. At this point, he gently moved his finger over that spot. When he then rubbed harder and faster, he could feel the nub swelling under his finger.

Eventually Jeremy removed his finger, his other hand holding his swollen penis, with a pained expression on his face. “I’m sorry, I can’t wait any longer.” Forgotten was his silent promise to give Susan an enjoyable and lengthy foreplay. Climbing up on the sofa, Jeremy used both his hands to push Susan’s thighs further apart. He nearly fell on her in his fevered rush for a release from his uncomfortable erection.

Chapter 08

Susan lay there on her back, legs spread wide, unsure of what was about to happen. She saw Jeremy’s large penis jutting out from his groin and began to scuttle backwards on the sofa away from him. “Oh, no, you don’t. Leave me alone! I didn’t want Simpson, and I sure as hell don’t want you!” she yelled, twisting her body while trying to get as far from him as she could.

When he ordered her, in a hoarse voice she didn’t recognize, “Let me do what I need to, and it’ll be over soon,” Susan found herself pulled back under him. She fought to get away once more when she felt the tip of his penis touching her. She let out a loud wail, understanding sinking in that she was powerless against his greater strength. “I told you I didn’t want this. I don’t love you. I don’t even like you any more, and I’m not ready.”

She aimed her hands at his face, so close to hers, using her long nails to claw at his eyes. “Don’t you dare touch me with that, that…!” Words failed her when Jeremy slapped her hand away from his face and covered her mouth with his. She struggled against this new invasion after he forced her mouth open and slid his tongue inside. Susan arched her back, trying to dislodge Jeremy’s heavy body off her. Instead, his penis went deeper into her vagina.

Suddenly, Jeremy butted up against her virginal fold of skin, and he left her mouth to more fully savor the sensation of his foreskin rubbing against her hymen. Wanting both of them to enjoy the experience as long as possible, Jeremy slowly pushed against the soft barrier and then pulled back. He misinterpreted Susan’s cries of frustration and pain for those begging him to continue. “Oh, sweetheart, it’s better than I even imagined it would be.”

For a second time, he assaulted her maidenhead, stretching the membrane a bit more before releasing his pressure on it. Lost in this new and overwhelming sensation, he no longer heard Susan. He did notice her fierce struggles to get away and once more misunderstood. “Yes, yes, you feel it too, don’t you?” Sweat poured off Jeremy’s body as he kept himself from gaining his own release. He wanted to give Susan as much sexual pleasure as she was giving him.

With his penis fully lodged inside her, keeping the thin membrane intact for the time being, Jeremy held off taking her virginity. He leaned on his elbows to keep his weight off her. After his third try at pushing against while not tearing through the thin tissue, Jeremy gave in to the pressure building up inside him. He grabbed Susan’s thighs to hold her still. “I’m sorry, I really am. I wanted to give you more time to know what it was like to have a man inside you.” He whispered this to her, ashamed to look at her because of his lack of control. “Let me do this, and next time I’ll try not to be such a pig.”

Susan wasn’t sure what he meant, but felt relief it was over when Jeremy pulled almost all the way out of her.

Chapter 09

“Shit, bloody hell!” Jeremy began swearing at the loud sound of his cell phone ringing. He had just steadied his large body over Susan’s soft body, ready to force his way through her hymen. “Don’t move, Susan. I’ve got to get that.” Jeremy pulled out of her and quickly moved off the sofa. He walked to where he’d dropped his slacks on the floor.

For a few seconds, Susan lay there, too startled to react. She watched Jeremy squat down as he searched for his phone. With this unexpected view of his naked body, Susan wasted more seconds before she pulled her thoughts together. Jumping off the sofa, she headed for the front door and freedom.

By now, Jeremy held the open phone to his ear and heard the voice of Captain Mallory. “Yes, sir. She’s fine, no permanent damage.” He spotted Susan trying to sneak by him, and held the phone against his chest while grabbing her around her waist. “No you don’t. We’re not done yet.” The phone back to his ear, Jeremy continued his conversation with Captain Mallory while keeping a tight hold on Susan. “Be quiet, Susan. You are not leaving me like this.” He gave this whispered command while listening to his supervisor telling him to take off a couple days to relax. “Yes, thank you. I will. See you Tuesday morning.”

Jeremy closed the cell phone and tossed it back on the floor. Now able to give Susan his full attention, he decided the sofa was too small and narrow. “You don’t want to go so soon, really you don’t.” He kept his arm around her waist and pushed Susan ahead of him into the bedroom. When they reached his bed, he held on to her, while pulling back the top sheet and blanket.

This revealed a dark-blue satin sheet, slightly wrinkled. Jeremy preferred to sleep nude and enjoyed the feel of the satin against his body. For him, the only feeling he enjoyed more was the soft skin of a woman. Susan was younger than the many married women he brought home to share his bed, so he knew he had to be more careful with her.

Jeremy found the bored wives he met wanted something their husbands never gave them. With these women, he mixed pain with pleasure, indulging them in their wildest fantasies. One divorced woman, a redhead with large silicone breasts, gave him some innovative sex toys on her second visit.

For a few weeks after that, until he tired of her cloying ways, Jeremy experimented with some of the unfamiliar items. In particular, he remembered the screams of delight the redhead gave when he moved a realistic vibrating dildo in and out of her vagina. Jeremy had just energetically sodomized her and continued to kneel over her, trying to get his strength back for a second romp.

He glanced over at the bedside table, wondering how soon he could use what he now kept in the table drawer. There was one item in particular that excited him. Jeremy recently had bought it, but so far he had found no woman to experience pleasure from its use. Jeremy felt himself hardening as he imagined applying it Susan’s body. He was eager to reach that point, but knew he still had to breach her maidenhead first. Jeremy climbed into bed, pulling her in to lie beside him. “Susan, I know you want this. I will try to take my time, I promise.” His hands moved over her body, so different from those of the skinnier matrons who spent their time at spas, trying to keep their girlish figure.

Jeremy first cupped his large hands over her firm breasts. He next took one breast into his mouth and greedily sucked on the tender flesh. When he flicked his tongue over the tiny pink nipple, he waited until it hardened before taking it between his teeth and gently biting down. While he alternated nibbling and licking one of Susan’s breasts, Jeremy used his fingers to roughly massage the nipple on her other one.

Finally lifting his head, he knew Susan wouldn’t resist anything he wanted to do to her. Jeremy tried not to show his excitement at seeing the dazed expression on Susan’s face. He couldn’t believe how quickly she became aroused after he barely touched her.

Chapter 10

Susan clutched at the sheet under her, not understanding the strange feeling slowly growing low in her belly. She no longer feared Jeremy’s sexual invasion of her body, since she mistakenly believed the pain she felt earlier meant she no longer was a virgin. Susan waited for his gentleness with her to continue, but found she had misjudged his need.

Without any warning, Susan felt him stretching out on top of her and gasped when he pushed her long hair to one side off her neck. She felt him nibbling her earlobe just before his tongue traced its way down to her collarbone. “Jeremy, you were right. I do want you,” she whispered, excited by his hot breath on her skin. She frantically rubbed her body against his, trying to relieve the low belly ache now growing stronger. Unsure of what Jeremy would do next, she hoped there was more to sex than what she’d experience with him so far. Her excitement grew when she felt him push her thighs apart and reach a hand down between them.

Jeremy watched her face as his fingers stroked the sensitive area between her legs. When he saw her eyes close and her head move restlessly on the pillow, he slipped his long middle finger into her vagina. He began rubbing, slowly and then faster. He moved his body into a better position over her while keeping up the rhythm of his finger. Jeremy listened to her, “yes, oh yes, no, yes, that feels…” and knew soon she would be ready for him.

“Almost, Susan, almost time.” Soon, Jeremy began to pant from his efforts to control his need for her. He intensified his efforts to ready Susan’s body for him by inserting a second finger. Jeremy stopped as soon as he realized he had total control over her, that it finally was time to take her. He removed his hand from between their bodies and instead wrapped it around his heavy, painful rod.

Susan opened her eyes and watched as Jeremy guided his penis to the entrance of her vagina. “Please hurry,” she begged, when she felt Jeremy’s thick arousal stretching her skin as he entered her. With all her attention centered on what Jeremy was doing with her lower body, Susan jumped when she heard his low voice next to her ear.

In a low whisper, Jeremy began telling her what he planned to do with her, using obscene terms he knew she wouldn’t understand. Meanwhile, he reached her hymen, determined to not spend more time there. He stopped talking long enough to rip through the thin membrane. Susan’s cry of pain only increased his sexual pleasure as he took her virginity.

CONTINUED IN NEXT SEGMENT

ID: 1547299   (Rated: XGC)
An Extraordinary Day - segment 03 
Chapters 11 thru 15, the end to the story, added Wednesday, 04/08/09
by J. A. Buxton


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