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Content Rating Notice: XGC -- May Contain Extreme Graphic Content
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An Extraordinary Day - segment 03
Chapters 11 thru 15, the end to the story, added Wednesday, 04/08/09
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Chapter 11

Despite his desperate need to continue, Jeremy tried to remain still inside Susan. He had no idea how bad her pain was, but knew there would be plenty of time to show her how giving and receiving pain could be pleasurable. His other women constantly told him how expert he was with this, particularly the giving of pain.

Finally, growing weary of her sobbing, he harshly said, “I want an end to your silly hysterics!” A smile of satisfaction crossed his face when Susan stopped crying, immediately obeying his command. “Nod your head if you liked what just happened.” Seeing Susan stubbornly ignoring his next order, Jeremy decided he’d humored her long enough.

He started moving within her, slowly at first, letting his heavy penis slide repeatedly over the spot where only shredded pieces of skin remained. Soon he began moving faster, pushing further into her, waiting for Susan to match his rhythm. When she failed to do this, Jeremy continued to dig his thick arousal deeper and more fiercely into her.

Susan suddenly realized the pain Jeremy had caused was gone. Instead of that horrible sharp pain, the mild ache that had started low in her belly now spread down to between her legs, increasing in intensity. “Jeremy,” she whispered, beginning to worry about this feeling, “what do you want me to do?”

He didn’t answer her, too intent with trying to hold off his impending climax. Grabbing her hips, he dug his fingers into her flesh and dragged her further down on the bed. This allowed him to insert his penis deeper inside, and he knew he had only a short time left before he filled Susan with his sperm. Until then, he wanted her to share in this experience and tried to slow down.

After Jeremy did this, Susan concentrated on lifting and lowering her hips in a tentative effort to match his rhythm. She wanted to weep with happiness when she heard his, “That’s it, a little more. Yes, you’re doing it.” As Jeremy picked up his speed again, the ache between Susan’s legs increased. Jeremy kept pushing her, his actions demanding she trust him without reservation. He let out a yell of satisfaction when she began grinding her pelvis against him in an uninhibited frenzy.

Jeremy knew she was ready to submit to whatever he wanted, and wasted no more time or energy fighting to control his own body. In his fevered attempt finally to climax, Jeremy increased his sexual assault, spurred on by Susan moaning every time he moved deeper and faster. Realizing she was learning that pain could give a person pleasure, Jeremy’s delight with this young inexperienced woman grew. “Oh, sweetheart, you feel so good. Hold on. I’m almost there.”

Susan heard his hoarse voice as if through a thick fog. She grabbed Jeremy’s hips to pull him further into her, needing him to release her from the powerful sensation crawling throughout her lower body. This only made the ache stronger, and Susan couldn’t keep back her screams.

Suddenly, Jeremy felt Susan convulsing under him as she fought against her first orgasm. He managed to hold on to the fraying threads of his control until her body stopped shaking. Only then did he give in to his own overwhelming need. He arched his back, gave a loud roar, and slammed into her twice more. With a thick stream of his semen pouring into Susan’s waiting vagina, Jeremy experienced the most powerful climax of his life.

Once his flow stopped, Jeremy rolled off Susan and onto his back. After a few minutes, his breathing slowed enough for him to lean on his side to check on her condition. His eyes immediately went to her face and saw it was taking Susan longer to recover. Her dazed expression made him smile with male pride at how well he had conquered the young virgin’s earlier reluctance. He leaned down and pushed strands of her damp hair off her face while whispering, “I’ve known for weeks I could have you any time I wanted.”

Unable to wait, he eagerly searched between her legs for proof of his sexual adroitness. “Yes, there it is,” he gloated, reaching out a hand to touch her wet skin. Jeremy ran his fingers slowly through the mixture of blood and semen staining her inner thigh. When he felt Susan finally moving, he managed to pull himself away from her and stumbled out of the bed.

“Be still, Susan,” he ordered, crossing the room and walking into the bathroom. “I need to clean you up.” He looked down at the streaks of blood on his limp penis and grinned. “Me first, though.” Through the open doorway came the muted sound of a toilet flushing, immediately followed by that of running water.

Susan watched as Jeremy came back into the bedroom. He was holding a wet sponge with a white towel draped over his arm.

Chapter 12

When he knelt on the bed, Susan tried to scramble away from him. “What are you going to do with that?” pointing at the dripping sponge.

Jeremy couldn’t help grinning. “Now, what do you think I’m going to do?” Not waiting for her to answer, he climbed onto the bed and swung a leg over her. In this way, he efficiently straddled her body, trapping the startled woman underneath him.

Susan had a splendid view of his back since he was facing away from her. She even enjoyed the pressure of his naked ass on her stomach. This weight lessened slightly when he leaned forward. When she felt Jeremy using the wet sponge between her legs and over her thighs, she couldn’t take her eyes off his firm buttocks. She watched the muscles there tightening while he worked at wiping away the blood and sperm.

Jeremy moved back and forth on her stomach, intent on washing the full length of her legs. Unable to resist, Susan reached toward his swaying body and was able to touch one of his cheeks.

Jeremy immediately stopped what he was doing and got off her body. Stretching out on his stomach with his feet in the direction of the bed’s headboard, he positioned his buttocks near her chest. This allowed Susan to lean on her side and started stroking first one cheek and then the other. Jeremy moved even closer, and she next ran her fingernails lightly over where she had been stroking him. After that, Susan repeatedly raked her nails over his ass while digging into the flesh. Jeremy was unable to speak when he heard her repeat what he had asked her earlier. “Do you want me to kiss it and make it feel better?”

Susan moved her body down on the bed until her head was level with the marks she made on his ass. Wrapping her arms around him, she pulled his unresisting body closer. “Tell me what you want, Jeremy. Do you want this?” leaning down to run her tongue over one red welt. “No? How about this then?” Susan leaned down to kiss the welt.

Much as he liked what Susan was doing, Jeremy wanted more. He quickly sat up, catching her unprepared. “No, this is what I want.” Pushing Susan onto her stomach, he gave her no time to object when his hands roughly separated her cheeks. The pleasure he got from Susan’s teasing had hardened his penis, and he was more than ready to give her another lesson in pain and pleasure.

When she felt Jeremy’s penis at the entrance to her rectum, Susan let out an angry cry. “No, I told you before that it hurts. Stop it!”

Jeremy laughed and ignored her loud complaints. It took some effort, but he did eventually force his thick rod into her tight hole. “Damn it, bitch, you feel good.” Rotating and moving his hips downward in a screw-like fashion, he managed to insert his entire swollen member all the way in. “Now, that wasn’t too bad, was it?” Jeremy started lifting his body and pushing back down on Susan’s ass. “I don’t ever again want to hear you complain that I’m hurting you.”

Susan struggled against the pain as Jeremy rapidly slid in and out of her. His legs on either side of her held her hips steady until he finally coated her insides with his thick sperm. This time when he rolled off her, Jeremy smiled to show his pleasure and immediately fell asleep.

Susan tried to get out of bed, but found Jeremy’s heavy legs still kept her captive. Soon, exhausted and wondering what else Jeremy had in store for her, Susan fell asleep. Once in the late afternoon and again in the middle of the night, she woke to find Jeremy’s hands caressing her body. He waited until she was fully alert before taking her, getting more aggressive each time.

Around six in the morning, Susan felt Jeremy shaking her. She sleepily opened her eyes to see him sitting beside her. He was holding something in his hands and seemed unable to contain his excitement. She got a better look at it when he spread it out on the sheet. “What’s that? What are you going to do with it?” By now, she was wide awake and sat up in the bed.

Jeremy couldn’t stop looking at her. Her lips looked swollen from the kisses he’d insisted on all night, and the white stains he’d left on her inner thighs pleased him. Jeremy reached out and touched one of her breasts, the memory of how it tasted still fresh in his mind. He gave himself a mental shake, wanting to share his excitement over his new toy with Susan. “I found this online and couldn’t resist buying it. You’ll be the first to try it out.” He frowned, a sudden thought hitting him. “I hope the batteries I put in are still good.”

Chapter 13

Jeremy picked up the item consisting of a complicated set of leather straps. “You’re going to like this, so lie down and let me put you into it.” Seeing Susan frantically shaking her head while yelling at him and trying to get off the other side of the bed, Jeremy grabbed her legs and pulled her back. “When I give you an order, I expect you to obey. Now, lie down!” Taking two of the loose straps, he snapped one around each of her wrists. Kneeling on her stomach, Jeremy attached the other end of the straps to the metal rungs of the headboard.

Getting off her, he said, “It’s really too bad you haven’t learned not to raise your voice at me.” Jeremy quickly picked up another leather strap with a round ball at its center. When Susan opened her mouth to object, he stuffed the ball into her mouth and tied the strap around her head. He smiled down into her frightened eyes. “Don’t be afraid, you really will like this. I promise.”

“Stay still while I get you all hooked up.” Jeremy spoke softly, attempting to calm Susan down. Waiting until she stopped struggling, he buckled a leather binding high up around her inner thigh, and then did the same to her other leg. Jeremy stopped to admire the way her pale skin looked against the black leather. “Oh, Susan, you are going to have more fun with this than you ever had before.” His excitement grew as he picked up the last piece of leather. Only two other items remained on the bed after that. When Susan saw what he was going to do, she became afraid once more, but Jeremy continued to ignore her struggling body. “This is the fun part, sweetheart.”

Saying this, he buckled the wide piece of leather at the top to each of the leg bindings. After that, he pushed the long narrow section at the bottom of the piece between her legs. Once more rolling her over on her stomach, he pulled the leather all the way through and untangled the straps on either side of it.
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“Almost done with this part. Hold still now. This might hurt just a bit.” With this warning, Jeremy gave a sharp tug on the straps. He heard Susan give a muffled cry when the leather painfully tightened underneath her body just before he finished attached the straps to the back of her leg bindings.

Then, for the last time, he moved Susan onto her back. Noticing tears were running down her face, he hurried with the last step to let her start enjoying the toy. The wide leather piece now was immovable and covered the area just above the entrance to her vagina before going between her legs. Jeremy sat back on his heels and checked the position of the wide leather. He looked at it from one angle and then another before he was satisfied.

“Are you comfortable, sweetheart? One more step, and you’re ready.” Jeremy reached behind him and grabbed a rubber vibrator shaped like a man’s flaccid penis. It was only about three inches long, but had what were thin layers of rubber covering it. A metal box at the other end was exactly the size of the round hole in the middle of the leather piece. Carefully, Jeremy guided the vibrator through the hole, making sure the tip of the rubber was completely inserted into Susan’s body.

Chapter 14

“Can you feel that, Susan?” Seeing her nod, he kept pushing until the entire fake penis was inside her. Having shown her how small the vibrator was, he knew she no longer was afraid. “Now, I’ll start this out at number one.” Jeremy quickly snapped the metal box into the leather, locking it securely in place. Reaching for the last item on the bed, he held up the remote control so Susan could see it. On the panel were four small sliding switches, all set at the number zero. Jeremy stood next to the bed and slowly moved the first switch up a notch to level one. He couldn’t help grinning at the surprised look on Susan’s face. This switch caused a couple inches of folded metal to come out of the box and make the rubber penis grow longer. “Feel good?”

Susan tried to smile around the plastic ball in her mouth, beginning to enjoy Jeremy’s new toy. She watched him move the second switch up a notch and felt a slight tingling coming from the vibrator. When he activated the third switch, the collapsible metal sheath inside the vibrator began to widen ever so slightly, expanding the rubber around it.

Jeremy sat down next to Susan, putting off moving the fourth switch until he thought she had fully accepted the others. Wanting to give her the full benefit of his toy, Jeremy watched her reactions closely. He took his time playing with the switches, bringing each one by stages from level one to three. With each level, he waited until she had stopped thrashing around on the bed before moving to the next level.

After enjoying this for almost an hour, and with the other switches safely back at two, Jeremy took a deep breath. His excitement growing in anticipation of what Susan would feel, he moved the fourth switch up to the same level. Jeremy began fiercely rubbing his suddenly painful penis when Susan arched her back slightly off the bed. Her muffled cries let him know the rubber vibrator was working correctly like a real penis, moving slowly in and out of the metal box.

Never stopping or slowly down his masturbation, he rocked back and forth while moving all the switches up a notch to three. The warning that came with this toy stated that numbers four and five were only for those more experienced with BDSM, so he decided to go no higher than three.

Even through her gag, he could hear her yelling. Within seconds, Jeremy joined her with a louder yell as his masturbating ended in a thick stream of semen splashing all over Susan and the bed. “Oh, that felt good, but I think we’ve both had enough for now.” It took him a couple minutes, but he eventually turned off the remote control and slowly removed Susan’s bindings. He saw the red marks on her skin from where the various tight straps had cut into her flesh. The last item he removed was the leather gag. “Do you have any idea how much I envy you right now? You seemed to be enjoying yourself, and all I could do was watch.”

Chapter 15

Unable to speak, Susan coughed and moved her mouth, trying to get rid of the taste and feel of the plastic ball. Her body felt battered as if a tornado had picked her up and dropped her back to the ground from a dozen feet up. She tried to get up, but fell back in pain, unable to accomplish even that simple task.

Jeremy was pleased with the success of his purchase, but somewhat unhappy the fun was over. He kept replaying in his mind the images of Susan’s reactions each time he moved the switches. “Susan, are you awake?”

“Yes,” Susan managed to get out, “and I want to thank you for sharing your toy with me.” She forced her body into an upright position and smiled at Jeremy. As if having a sudden thought, she opened her eyes wide and asked, “You know, I think a man might have as much fun with it.”

Jeremy thought she was crazy. “Susan, the instructions that came with it made no mention of its use by a man. After all, men don’t have a vagina.”

“But, they do have a rectum. Wouldn’t the vibrator fit there as well?” She waited to see what he thought of this idea and knew he agreed when he stretched out his long body on the bed. It took Susan longer to attach everything backwards on Jeremy, but eventually he was all strapped in. She even had discovered two more lengths of leather in the drawer and used them to tie his feet to the bed’s footboard.

While he remained on his stomach with his trapped legs spread wide, she verified the location of the round hole and began to insert the short rubber penis into his anus. She grinned when she saw his cheek muscles tighten. As she slowly started pushing in the full three inches, she scolded him, “Come on, Jeremy, you have to wait. Don’t be so greedy.” She gently slapped both his cheeks before locking the metal box into place.

“You are brilliant to think of this,” whispered Jeremy, already anticipating what he would feel with the switches at number one. He yanked at his arms and legs to test the straps holding his captive. “Hurry, sweetheart, I’m getting hard already.” He wiggled around on the bed, getting into a more comfortable position.

Susan knelt on the bed, swinging the gag in her hand. “Do you have anything else to say before I put this in?” Jeremy turned his body slightly to face her, a big smile on his face as he shook his head. He opened his mouth wide, and Susan slid the plastic ball inside.

After tying the gag as tight as she could, Susan sat on the side of the bed and picked up the remote. Instead of moving one switch at a time as Jeremy had done, she flicked all four on at the same time to number one. “You like that, don’t you? Want me to go up a level?” Seeing his head nodding, she did that and watched his body twitching from the increased vibration of the fourth switch.

At this point, she put the remote on the table next to the bed and walked to the bedroom closet. She found a raincoat that seemed long enough to reach her knees and slipped it on. Leaving it unbuttoned, she returned to the bed. “How are you feeling? Ready for number three?” Picking up the remote, she moved the switches up to the third level.

Jeremy began to moan at the pleasant feeling Susan was letting him enjoy. He turned and saw her leaning down to pick up his discarded cell phone. Unable to speak, he watched as she flipped it open and dialed.

When somebody answered on the other line, Susan asked, “Hello. Is Captain Mallory there?” She turned to smile at Jeremy before continuing the phone conversation. “He’s gone home already?” She listened for a few seconds to the person on the other end. “Yes, this is Susan Wilson, and I’d like to leave a message for when he comes back on duty this evening.” She listened before saying, “Right, Susan Wilson, the officer at the Simpson arrest yesterday.”

Jeremy started to wonder what Susan was saying after she turned away from him and started speaking too quietly for him to hear. He didn’t know when Susan finished that conversation and made a second call. He honestly didn’t care, since he was enjoying himself too much. If Susan had been a virgin, so was he in a way. This was the first time he had allowed a penis, even a fake one, into his ass.

Susan startled him when she quietly returned and sat on the bed near him. His raincoat was wide open on her, and Jeremy wanted to run his hands over her nude body, now so familiar to him. Through the gag, he tried to tell her he was ready to take her again, but only mumbled words came out. He jerked on the straps around his wrists and only managed to pull the leather tighter.

When there was a loud blast on a car horn from the street outside, Susan stood and buttoned the raincoat. She went to the door, opened it, and called out to the driver in the yellow cab, “I’ll be right with you.”

She went back to where Jeremy was struggling frantically to get free. One last time, Susan checked that he was securely attached to both ends of the bed with his gag firmly tied around his head. With that, she took the remote off the table, making sure he was watching. One after another, she slowly moved each of the switches from three to four and then to five.

She stood for another minute, enjoying her sweet revenge for what Jeremy did to her. She gave one last smile at hearing his muffled screams while slowly being driven mad by the extremely fat and very long, rapidly moving, and madly vibrating dildo. Taking the remote with her, Susan walked outside and closed the front door behind her. She began laughing since she knew Jeremy wouldn’t be expected at work for another 24 hours.

The cabby gave her a strange look when he heard her say, “Just relax, Jeremy. All I want is for you to have fun.”

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