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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1549901  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Fallow Heart
A fallow heart still remembers its dreams. (Form: Lilibonelle)
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The Fallow Heart

** #1544389 Not An Image **

Its promises past, an abandoned pot,
patiently waiting in fading sunbeams.
What time's overlooked, without a thought,
a fallow heart still remembers its dreams.

Patiently waiting in fading sunbeams,
the remembered warmth of love that has gone
in my reverie still sparkles and gleams.
With anticipation I wait the new dawn.

What time has overlooked, without a thought,
are the seeds that remain at the flower's demise.
Sheltered and nurtured until they are brought
out in their glory with the new sunrise.

A fallow heart still remembers its dreams.
Through xeric landscapes, hope remains alive.
Like a mirage, life is not what it seems.
With a constant heart, love can grow and thrive.

Notes

Image inspired
Form: Lilibonelle This form is made up of four quatrains. The lines of the first quatrain repeat at the beginning lines for the rest of the stanzas. Explained: The second line of the 1st stanza becomes the first line of the second stanza. The third line of the 1st stanza becomes the first line of the 3rd stanza. And the fourth line of the 1st stanza becomes the 1st line of the 4th stanza. You can use a specific rhyme pattern if you would like or make it free verse.

fallow - not in use; inactive
xeric - characterized by, or adapted to an extremely dry habitat; a desert
constant - steadfast; firm in mind or purpose; resolute

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Ken
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