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  >> Static Item >> Prose >> Environment >> ID #1550285  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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Observation of nature while driving through mountains.
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                                              PURE

Water, splashing, pure:
standing rock face exudes life--
shiny moisture, cold.

Shiny moisture, cold.
Ancient mountain cut by road;
progress sears its face.

Progress sears its face;
mountain rock cut through for growth.
Drivers have view now.

Drivers have view now:
sight of rock-face now displayed;
mountain's spring, unearthed.

Mountain's spring, unearthed;
crystal droplets springing out--
water, splashing, pure!
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