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kiss in the rain
my boyfriend and I had our first kiss in the rain. this is about the experiance
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Its only drizzling thats what we said,
As we stood on my front porch
I could feel my heart pounding in my chest,
My back against the rail,
I could tell by the way you were acting
You were going to kiss me
As you stepped forward
I could feel the rain start to come down a little faster
And withen a moment your lips covered mine
Followed by your arms around my waist
It doesn't matter that were both soaked
it just matters that my arms incircle your neck
Suddenly I'm addicted to you
And the things you do to me
Is this a dream?
No, it has to be real
just in case i open my eyes
Sure enough your their holding me close,
As your lips move over mine.

Baby I am falling in love with you more and more every day. I LOVE YOU J.E.K<3
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