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TELL ME WHEN
you didn't love me anymore.
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TELL ME WHEN
Love I feel for you would flood an ocean
And wash away all doubts you have in me,
My heart overflowing with emotion
With hope the door on yours' will set you free.

Once you loved me I know – you told me so
And showed me in many different ways,
I know that was so very long ago
Yet there are times it feels like only days.

Did it ever really come to an end?
Can you honestly answer and be sure?
Such an answer to you I cannot send,
Tell me when you didn't love me anymore.


(c)5/08/09

Monty


ABAB 10 syllable scheme.





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