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  >> Static Item >> Short Story >> Contest Entry >> ID #1559042  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
New beginning.
Tell a story with 55 words for a competition.
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The silence in the room was vicious.

Unwrapping the bandage from around her face, a frightening anticipation after months of lying in a hospital bed, her mind raced anxiously.
               
opening her eyes, staring at the mirror, she knew her life would be changed forever.

                                                                                    A promise to herself not to shed a tear,
                                                                                                                                              humbly broken.
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