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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1560231  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
This Feeling
Feelings of lonliness and despair change to joy upon receiving a gift.
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This Feeling

I feel empty
Nothing left within
How could this be?
No one understands me.
This feeling is lonely
This emptiness is unspeakable!
I feel my heart has sunk
You treat me like trash.
This is an empty feeling
To be an outsider
Who's misunderstood
These voices say "DIE!"
And I want to cry.
But who would care?
This isn't fair!
To be a nobody who feels invisible
If only someone cared
And for once said "LIVE"
But who would be willing to give
Up his life for me?
Finally! I have been filled!
This emptiness is gone!
I'm free to live,
For Christ was willing to give!


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