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  >> Static Item >> Prose >> Romance/Love >> ID #1561044  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
When do you hear?
A poem I wrote for my boyfriend and I. It's supposed to be a dialogue of sorts.
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Somebody, please,
Tell me what I'm feeling.
This feeling, so much greater than happiness.
So much greater than love.
There has to be an emotion for this.
I'm not the only one to feel this way, am I?


No, you're not alone.
I feel the same way too.
The bliss, the love, the happiness
It can't compare to what I'm feeling.


When do you feel this amazing feeling?
When does the loneliness stop and the music begins?
The music begins a soft, slow song, with the undertone of happiness.
When do you hear the orchestra play? When do you hear the strings and the horns?
Because, babycakes, I only hear them when I think of you.


The music you talk about?
I hear it all the time.
I hear the strings slowly play an A minor key.
But then I hear the F major beat from the horns.
You'd think it'd sound like a mess.
But it sounds beautiful. It sounds amazing.
Because, Hunny bear, that's how I feel when I'm with you.
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