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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1563029  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Loving Eyes
A short poem about my current relationship.
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I sense in your look that the truth might be lies,
But those words so caring, and your thoughtful sighs,
Express your love and the passion I relish!
I complete with you my lifelong wish…
My love, my partner, my will remains strong,
For you have discovered I’ve waited so long;
You’ve raised the bar on my life gone astray,
Seeing your beauty brings sunlight my way –
My passion, a flame wind or waves can’t exhaust;
Your loving eyes engaged, fulfill visions once lost…
© Copyright 2009 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Tim Chiu has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
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