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Sevenlings Form
just attempting a new form of poetry that someone told me about.
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Each day brought money,
Fifteen of twenty-four hours;
Sleep lost productive value.

Body's age unlike wine;
Hazardous repetitions successful,
Unaware of ones own time.

Working towards a mass obsession?



"Bite Size Poetry Contest E: I'm Back!!!



My friend Dis bouncing back and forth told me about this form.


The rules of the sevenling:

The first three lines should contain an element of three - three connected or contrasting statements, or a list of three details, names or possibilities. This can take up all of the three lines or be contained anywhere within them. Then, lines four to six should similarly contain an element of three, connected directly or indirectly or not at all. The seventh line should act as a narrative summary or punchline or as an unusual juxtaposition. There are no set metrical rules, but being such as short form, some rhythm, metre or rhyme is desirable. To give the form a recognisable shape, it should be set out in two stanzas of three lines, with a solitary seventh, last line. Titles are not required. A sevenling should be titled Sevenling followed by the first few words in parentheses The tone of the sevenling should be mysterious, offbeat or disturbing, giving a feeling that only part of the story is being told. The poem should have a certain ambiance which invites guesswork from the reader.



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