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A college student goes home with the lovely female librarian. She has a surprise for him.
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Magda Zielinski, the night librarian at Somerville College, was a slender, elegant raven-haired woman lusted after by most of the male faculty and students.  Tonight, she was wearing an attractive purple velour pantsuit that didn't go unnoticed by the tall, dark-haired man pretending to be reading a reference book in the back of the library.  The young man had come in an hour ago, and was the only person in the library other than Magda.  With five minutes to go until closing time, she was busy putting away the books, getting the library ready to close, and seemed to pay scant attention to the man who was carefully following her with his eyes.

A minute before closing time the young man stood and slowly walked out of the library.  Magda's eyes tracked his exit from the room, just as she had watched him enter the room.  She completed the last few tasks, turned off the light, and locked the door.  She left the building and continued walking until she was fifty feet behind the tall, man clearly visible in the full moonlight.

"Jimmy," she called out.

The tall young man stopped and turned around.  "Hello, Ms. Zielinski," he stammered. 

When Magda caught up to Jimmy, she looked up into his pale blue eyes.  "You've been studying hard for the last few weeks."

"Yes ma'am. I've got to do well in finals if I want to go to law school."

"All that studying doesn't leave much time for social life," Magda said, smiling seductively and moving closer to him.

Jimmy face heated as he digested her last remark and the nature of her smile.  "Oh, I get out," he said.

"You're twenty-one, aren't you?"  Magda asked.

"Yeah.  Sure."  Jimmy stammered again.

"Would you like to come to my apartment and have a beer with me?"  Magda asked with her tongue licking her lips.

Jimmy, blinking rapidly, not believing what he had just heard.  Just watching her tongue made blood rush to his groin.  "Sure, sure" he said strongly.

"My car's over there," Magda said, pointing to a dark gray Lexus.  She walked towards her car and Jimmy followed her.

She opened the doors and they both got in, and in a moment, she was driving towards her apartment eight blocks away.  She drove behind the apartment building into her space and they both got out of the car.  A few minutes later, they were in her simply furnished apartment.  Jimmy wouldn't have noticed if it there had been gold furniture in it.  Wow, he thought. When he looked at Magda, her dark blue eyes captured him.  He became aroused again, just looking at her.

"Why don't you sit on the couch," Magda suggested, pointing to the large dark blue sofa.

"Sure," Jimmy said, and sank into the soft, plush sofa.

"Would you like a beer?"  Magda asked.

"No thanks."  Jimmy could barely swallow, and his breathing was shallow and rapid.

Magda sat on the couch about two feet away from him.  She put her right arm on top of the couch so it was almost touching Jimmy's left shoulder.

Jimmy couldn't take his eyes off her.  The top two buttons of her velour jacket were undone enabling him to see the top of her black lacy bra.  He noticed a green crystalline pendant with a gold teardrop at the bottom.

"Do you like my crystal?"  Magda asked as she began to twirl it about with her left forefinger and thumb.

"Yes.  Is that an emerald or something?"

"It's similar to an emerald, but it has special qualities."  Magda continued to twirl the pendant, sparking brightly as it caught the light.

Jimmy blinked, becoming more fascinated with the shimmering crystal.

"Keep looking at the crystal and you will see something special," Magda said.

Jimmy's attention focused on the spinning crystal that seemed to grow larger as he looked at it.

"You're becoming relaxed as you look at the crystal," Magda said softly.  "In fact, you are becoming sleepy and can barely keep your eyes open."  She smiled and licked her lips as Jimmy's eyes began to close.

Jimmy sat motionless as Magda talked to him.

"Your mind is at peace, and you can hear only my voice," Magda said.  "Nod your head when you feel totally relaxed."

Jimmy nodded his head, breathing slowly and seemingly asleep.

"The sound of my voice fills you with love and there is nothing you wouldn't do for me.  From now on, whenever you hear my voice, you will unhesitatingly do whatever I ask."  Magda studied Jimmy's face, and though she was convinced he was under her control, she decided to put it to one final test.  She reached for a pin behind the couch and said, "Jimmy, hold your right arm out with the palm facing up."

Jimmy did as she commanded.

"I'm about to touch your hand with an eraser and you won't feel anything."  Then she jabbed his hand with the pin.  Jimmy made no response, and Magda nodded.  Then she reached for a double-edged razor blade that she had hid in a crevice of the couch.  Magda took Jimmy's right wrist in her left hand and held the razor blade above it.  As she did so, she felt her fangs lengthened in her eyes became opaque, revealing her a vampire.  Her sharp incisors extended, and a lustful grin had replaced her warm pleasant smile.  Magda's nostrils flared as she experienced hunger for the vital fluid.

Still holding Jimmy's wrist, she brought the razor down and made a narrow cut in a prominent vein.  Blood began to flow and threatened to drip on the floor.  But, before it did so, Magda's mouth engulfed his wrist sucking in all the precious fluid.  The force of her sucking increased the amount of blood flowing from the cut in the vein.  She continued sucking for about ten minutes.  Magda pulled her lips back and lapped up the flowing blood with her tongue.  As she did so, the cut began to close, and finally healed, looking like an old, faint scar.

Magda raised her head and cleaned her lips with her tongue.  Her incisors grew smaller and within a few minutes, she was once again an attractive woman.  "Jimmy, you can put your arm down by your side."  She turned and went to the kitchen where she put the razor in the trash and then went to the refrigerator.  She took out a half-gallon container of orange juice, reached for a large glass in the cupboard, and filled the glass with juice.  Magda went back to the living room with the glass in one hand, the orange juice in the other, and stood in front of Jimmy.

"Take the glass I am about to give you and drink all its contents.  When you are done hold the glass out to me."  Jimmy drank all the orange juice and held the glass out to Magda. Magda again filled the glass with orange juice.  "Finish every last drop."  After Jimmy finished drinking and handed her the glass, she said, "Put your hand down in your lap."  Then she returned to the kitchen, put the glass in the sink, and the orange juice container in the refrigerator.

Standing in front of Jimmy once again, Magda smiled at him, and ran her fingers through his hair.  "We are in my bed having the most wonderful sex you have ever experienced.  I'm fulfilling every fantasy you ever had, and in a moment, you will have your third orgasm.  You roll off to the side, exhausted with the pleasure of making love to me.  We lie in bed for quite some time before we get dressed, and I walk you to the door.  You smile at me as we hold hands.  You love me more than you have loved anyone else.  You will tell no one about our evening together, but you will eagerly await my next call.  Stand up and take my hand in yours, and when you open your eyes you'll be fully awake.  You'll tell me how much you love me and then leave."

Jimmy stood, gazed into Magda's eyes, and sighed as he beheld the woman he loved.

Magda walked him to the door and put her arms around him, kissing him passionately.  Jimmy responded in kind.

"Magda, I love you so much."

"And I love you."

"I've got to go, but I'll see you soon," Jimmy said, and then he left.

Magda felt sated from the blood she had taken from Jimmy, but she needed more.  After she reached, into her pocket for a little black book containing the names of other students under her control, she pressed the numbers on her cell phone.  "Fred, I would love to have you come over next Wednesday at 10 p.m."



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