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GTTP – Lesson Four Homework



Part I

1. “Just what did he say to you?” asked Paul.

2. The children’s book was very entertaining to the small group.

3. The waiter asked if there would be anything else.

4. The rain kept pouring outside; we were very unhappy that we could not go out.

5. Mother said we were to buy roast beef, corn, cornmeal, spinach and bread; but we forgot about the spinach in our hurry home.

6. Mr. Davis’ briefcase lay near the door and his coat on the chair with his wife’s present.  (I know I changed some of words and order, but I didn’t see another way of doing it.)



Part II

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Dogs--Home Alone 
I should have known better, but ...
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Revision of Dogs Home Alone 
A rewrite for punctuation corrections for GTTP homework
by JoDe




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