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Content Rating Notice:  Recommended for Readers 18 Years and Older Only
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Total Devotion
55 word story
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Avg Rating: (9)
Total Devotion


Outside the Stevensons watch the flames consume their house.
Little Billy holds his dog tightly.
All of a sudden, the dog bolts, entering the burning house.
In ten minutes' time, the dog, slowly moving, comes in view of the doorway with Billy's teddy in his mouth.


The roof collapses crushing the dog but saving teddy.



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