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The Soldeirs
this is a rewrite of a poem I wrote last year
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The Soldeirs

The soldeirs
once enjoyed
their freedom
but now they
fight for ours

They live in
tents and mud
brick houses
the soldeirs
live like this
for us

The soldeirs
have fought
for long enough
don't you agree
lets bring them
back to their
homes and families


Birthdays missed
holidays passed
just so tthe leaders
can have more
power this is
what the soldiers
deal with every
day

The soldeirs they
wish for this war
to end just like
we all need to
hope and wish and
pray for this day
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