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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1567116  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Do You Love Me Now
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You whisper in my ear

breathing down my neck

I feel the heat coming off your body

every part of me is touching

every part of you

there's a thickness in the air

our hearts are pounding

I hear your heavy breathing

as you reach in for a kiss

our lips slowly meet

then the world around me melts

there's a feeling between us

that we cannot control

it takes over us

our bodies go on without us

no thought behind our movements. . .

As you lay beside me

with a smile on your face

You say the magic words

That put me in my place











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