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Content Rating Notice:  Recommended for Readers 18 Years and Older Only
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Undelivered
A lightly erotic poem in reverse cinquain.
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Undelivered

We held close.
His lips on my cheek.
My breath froze--
Why was I so meek?
I can't be this weak.

He met with my lips.
Could I stop my grip?
I shivered--
He left with a slip.
Undelivered.



The syllabic count is 3 and 5.
A Reverse Cinquain poem is written with a syllabic count. So, mine is: 3/5/3/5/5 then 5/5/3/5/3.
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