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Bri Danse Nait
"Bri born to dance" Acrostic Poem
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This is a double sided acrostic poem reading down both sides. I used the same letters on both sides, just scrabbled to form different words. Left side reads Bri Danse Nait (down) and the right side reads Brianna's Tide (down).  so I guess a better title for this poem would be "Bri, born to dance Brianna's tide".

Bri Danse Nait
(Bri born to dance)

Battling, fighting, against the stab
Realizing I’m under water
Ignorant and sad, the wound is mini
Dying in the deep, drowned at sea
Angry storms do not sleep, the ocean
Noiseless and the sun it does burn
Scared and alone covered in alga
Emotional concern, I need to grow gills
Navigating against the swift moving current
Allowing Gods might when I see the tsunami
Intangible nothings giving no light to witness my end
Trembling now I’m lost inside the wave



Please tell me what you think.  Thank you for reading.
Bri
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