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I'll never understand the mind of a fourteen-year old girl. "C'mon, Bekkah. Let's get going." Tearing her eyes from her DSi, Bekkah glared at me. "Dad! I was going for level 16," she huffed. "How about trying for level 1 in life?" I threw back. "Listen, please. You promised you'd help." I could see her mind working. Bekkah has this ability to spend hours thinking of ways to get out of fifteen minutes worth of work. I saw the slot machine in her brain ring up three matches across. "But you have to get hay for your horse," she smiled. "You can just pick up a few bales for Snow Moon, can't you?" "True," I said. "But they've just opened their vegetable stand. I'll get the hay, you pick out the produce and that way it won't take long." Surprising me, she agreed and I spent ten minutes trying to figure out how I'd lost that battle but couldn't. The stand was open as we pulled in. I walked over with Bekkah to see what was in season and was pleasantly surprised to find a large stack of red, sweet tomatoes. "They're fresh off the vine," the lady behind the counter said, pointing to a garden area. "How much?" asked Bekkah. "Fifty-cents, each." Bekkah looked at the field. "Would you sell me some green ones?" I suppressed a grin. I could tell by her tone that her mind was working again and I curiously waited to see where this was going. "Well, I guess so." "How much for those?" Bekkah asked in her little girl, innocent voice. "How about a quarter each?" the lady offered. "OK, I'll take a dozen." As the lady began to get up, Bekkah added "I'll pick them up next week." I'll never understand the mind of a fourteen-year old girl. Notes Word Count: 300 An entry for June 12 "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge" Prompt: Write a story that includes the words tomato, listen, matches. Thank you for taking time to read my words. I would appreciate it if you took a moment and left a comment. Your reaction, impressions, criticisms, - yes, even praise Ken
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