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Flowing Thoughts
I wrote this without reading it afterwards, ended up pretty good.
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my weakness burns my eyes the fear inside hates the sun
tell it to quit or fight this shit
i cannot see the truth that is behind
gaining strength within my thoughts
pullin my power out your eyes
so sick inside writing lies
tormented distruction pulse eruption
take this away or take me to die
wont cast out my demon he is my only friend
take in this sin and hold my breath
lost my train of thought the I forgot
this is a nothing to dance about
i sit and pout waiting it out
took that ride to the other side and got jiped
was filled with false impressions of a tangled web
gotta hold my heart its rushing to the surface
head so thick its flooding my thoughts
fuck now im lost take it or leave it i am foam
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