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Echoes From The Heart

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Earl Pablo D Zacarias Jr.

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Content Rating Notice:  Recommended for Readers 18 Years and Older Only
  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1573572  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Insurmountable Regrets
How would you feel like this?
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Insurmountable Regrets

A blazing regret haunted me for years
Like a river of guilt pushed me to tears
Relinquished with solace, I'm left me behind
Trapped in a pit, helpless and darkened mind
A thorny path unfolded, lost its veers.

Who could help me from this torment and fear?
Stunned my hopes and my dreams, nothing to cheer!
Regrets waxed my inner feelings, where’s divine?
A blazing regret…

Crumbling inside, struggling for better sphere
Words poisoned me, killed my nerves was it fair?
Rage emotions embraced my soul entwined
Poignant countenance, why you’re so unkind?
Winds of failure encompassed my primer
A blazing regret…


A/N:
Poetic pattern - Rondeau
Syllabic count - 10 per line except for the (R) - refrain
Rhyming scheme - (R-is a refrain)

aabba
aab(R)
aabba(R)
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