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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Contest Entry >> ID #1575117  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
MY INSIDE, SUMMER COLD!
WRITER'S CRAMP ENTRY, O6/26/09--My Cold
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MY INSIDE, SUMMER COLD!

I caught an inside summer cold--
I caught it in the house!!
I wasn't even having fun--
I was chasing a mouse!!

At least that's what my small cats thought,
when they heard all the noise--
for me, it was the sanding,
and other building joys!

It stuffed my nose up real well--
it stuffed my lungs up, too!
I coughed until I saw blue stars,
and couldn't wear my shoes!

I coughed and hacked, but painted straight!
I wanted to do well,
but when I woke up speaking French
I knew it was the smell

of paint. My precious family home
had cost me my good health,
but when my agent found me out,
that French, it brought me wealth!
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