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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Children's >> ID #1577246  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Disappearing from Forgiveness
From the pain of growing up, being able to forgive and seek forgiveness.
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The effort of forgiveness
From which we’re disappearing
Is remarkable for its kindness,
That point of truth we’re fearing!

For love is coming, lest we deny
Our sisters and our brothers –
While needy children most require
Their mothers and their fathers.

Alienated by their youth,
A tragic, blatant call,
Crafted by God’s plan and truth,
And humbling to us all…

Ruthless sins, an alias,
A saintly love to martyr.
Those living on the precipice
Recall Jesus and the Father.

Inherent shame we give to Thee,
A loved one’s sacred prayer,
A collection, heard quite openly,
His mercy shan’t be rare!
© Copyright 2009 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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