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Torn Apart
Contest Entry; Senior Center Coloring the World Contest Prompt- "Torn Apart"
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What happened to our love?
When did our troubles start?
When did “what God joined together”
Become so torn apart?

We vowed to love forever.
Two hearts becoming one.
One thing lead to another
And, now the harm is done.

Two heads can’t rule a marriage.
No place for jealousy.
It should be like a partnership,
Instead of "about me”.

The “give and take” forgotten,
Seemed more like give and give
Until “take” became unbearable
With no room left to “forgive”.

Today it is so easy
To end marriage with divorce.
So what if first you don’t succeed,
You should not feel remorse.

We signed a lifelong contract
To love, honor and obey,
In front of God and witnesses.
But, now we’ve gone astray.

Is there any way to fix this?
Is there anything left to do?
I still have feelings deep inside.
Is it the same with you?

Maybe we should reconsider.
Turn back to God and start
A marriage built on values
No man can tear apart.

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