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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1580582  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
All Seeing Eye
Triquain Swirl about learning how it feels to be on the other side. For 'Rhythm & Rhyme'
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Way up here,
eyes leak against the wind;
goosebumps speckle between my freckles.
It is the horror, not the height, which disturbs me.
Tears aren't wind-formed, nor chills borne from cold.
The sights are amazing.
I see you.
You smile at her, then kiss.
And slowly on, the wheel grinds forward--
deft reminder that what goes around comes around.
I watch you lost in cotton-candy,
sticky caresses shared,
way down there.



The double Triquain Swirl can be rhyming or non-rhyming. The syllable pattern is: 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3, 6, 9, 12, 9, 6, 3.
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