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WHO COULD ASK FOR MORE?
Rhyming Free Verse of something that happened over 50 years ago.
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WHO COULD ASK FOR MORE

The water was real high that spring,
Now so many years ago.
I’d stopped there on the bridge to watch
The raging water flow.

Then I saw a small boy playing
At the rivers edge.
Even as I shouted out to warn him,
He slipped off the ledge.

I was fifty feet or so down river
From where the boy fell in.
He gripped briefly to a tree branch.
The current was too strong for him.

There was a path down to the river,
And I was standing there.
As he was passing beneath the water,
I grabbed for his blonde hair.

I had a lot of help from God above,
Of that I have no doubt.
The little boy was safe on land,
Somehow I’d pulled him out.

I carried him to his mother’s arms,
That little boy of four.
An examination proved he was just fine,
Who could ask for more?

©07/15/09
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