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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1584374  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
forsaken
guy left girl
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your tears, they burn me
like acid falling from the sky

why have you forsaken me?

do you remember who saved you from your cage?

why turn your back on me now?

God will deny you Heaven if you go with her

would you rather burn eternally
than be with me?

am i truely that bad?

you never answer me anymore.

forsakened soul
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