Agent Query Letter-revised 8/1

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Dear XXXXX,

I'm writing you to seek representation for my 90,000 word erotic urban fantasy Vampire Vacation, which four editors requested in full at the recent Romance Writers of America National convention.~0~

What do you get when you combine a 580-year-old vampire, her human husband, and a resort for the undead? A sexually charged, sardonic relationship between a married couple and a never ending cast of unique characters..~1~

Meet Vivian, the supernatural equivalent of Mr. Roarke on Fantasy Island, who projects illusions to create the perfect vacation spot for vampires in Alaska.  Upon a check of the guest rooms, Vivian stumbles across a murdered body, one that is neither an employee nor a guest. She and her husband, Rafe, hide the corpse, convinced they can track down the killer without alerting their customers. ~2~

When orchestrating the sexual escapades of some guests and questioning others proves to be too much for her, Vivian listens to Rafe’s advice.  For the first time in hundreds of years, she agrees to involve and trust an outsider for assistance. It’s a difficult step for Vivian, who knows in the end she may wind up having to kill to keep her secrets safe.~3~

I’m contacting you because your agency represents XXXX, whose novel I enjoyed. I've researched you online and have stopped by your XXXX siteOR your blog OR read your interview on XXXXXX and would be honored to have you represent me.~4~

This spring, I won a flash fiction writing contest for a horror entry, received third place in an erotica contest, and recently placed second for my rough draft of chapter one of  Vampire Vacation in the RWA Dixie First sponsored contest.  I’m a member of RWA, Sisters In Crime and several subchapters of these associations. My work already has a fan base of 1,000 on Facebook.  Please stop by and see what some of the reviewers from my private reading group have to say about my novel:  http://www.facebook.com/c.j.ellissonfanpage~6~

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my query,~7~

C.J. Ellisson
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