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A Broken Dream
Does life ever truly turn out as we expected?
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A Broken Dream
by Lane Diamond
July 31, 2009

Count: 18 (10-8) – 18 (10-8) – 18 (10-8) – 18 (10-8)

Crickets sing their sorrowful serenade, as embers of the dawn ignite.
My mind still lingers in a broken dream, against which I've no will to fight.
In an ebbing tide of hope and desire, my thoughts drift over memory lane,
To visions of what my life would become, grand plans cast utterly in vain.

I still recall every guy from the gang, telling stories around campfires,
As we drank warm beers and rocked to cool songs, each of us dreamers and liars.
Foul gossip about the hot girls from school, fueled our lies and twisted tales.
Casual winks, guffaws and loud snickers, exposed our most insincere wails.

Nights in spotlight on the basketball team, cherishing every game we won,
Finding a familiar face in the crowd, where a father bonded with son.
In school commons during free periods, we played Pinochle all the day,
Or practiced in groups a foreign language, so that "Je peux parler Francais."

Redheads in Science and blonds in English, the French teacher we guys adored,
Shattered the endless rhythm and routine; a cure for the hopelessly bored.
Weekends heralded escape from the grind, sanctuaries of fun and thrills.
Friday night at the drive-in theater brought romance, adventure and chills.

Graduation arrived on summer winds; we simmered and stewed in our gowns.
Ceremony stopped and parties began; at keggers our sorrows were drowned.
Yearbooks were passed among the attendants, and everyone signed them the same.
"Good luck and have a good time in college," followed by illegible names.

We all saw each other from time to time, in the hot summer days ahead.
With names and addresses, we'd stay in touch, or so that's what everyone said.
I wrote some letters that fall in college, but never did get a reply.
I gave up all hope of receiving one, after a few months had gone by.

Thirty years later, I've seen an old friend, a neighbor from the glory days.
We smoked a cigar as we reminisced, before going our separate ways.
With my cell number and email address, he assured me he'd stay in touch.
I insisted that I would do the same, though it might be asking too much.

Friends drift apart as we seek our own way.  How can we expect any less?
Yet I seek salvation in the lifeboat, as I flounder in this distress.
Crickets sing their sorrowful serenade, as embers of the dawn ignite.
My mind still lingers in a broken dream, against which I've no will to fight.
© Copyright 2009 Dave Lane / Lane Diamond (UN: diamond_hoop at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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