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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> How-To/Advice >> ID #1592501  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Mixed Up Badly
"A teary-eyed, torn up face...Not brave and not too savvy..."
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A teary-eyed, torn up face,
She is mixed up badly –
Not dedicated to something important,
Not brave and not too savvy!

She’s got quite a burden –
Emotions driving her nuts…
Can she come to her senses,
No ifs, ands, or buts?

Creatures live to rule the world,
To improve their meaningful lot;
Committed to some idea or work,
They give life all they’ve got…

Expecting tasks to get done,
Ideas in full swing –
She’s no longer mixed up;
Now she’s a wild thing!
© Copyright 2009 Tim Chiu (UN: mirtx at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
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