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Amanda
poem about amanda
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Amanda... Amanda.. A name ...
It brings forth, an offering
Both full of peace, and full of pain

You are Rose in a Garden
A thorn in the side,
Your a dove in the western sky


You are good, you are bad.
You drive me crazy.
You make me happy.
You make me sad.

Amanda.. Amanda...
Once to Respond, At My fainest call.
Now in my Bloody Naked screams.
You don't respond at all.

Your name is hors in my throat from the volume i yell.
my figures are numb from the letters I spell.

Amanda.. Amanda..
such an Amazing name.
I only wish mine,
Could be the same.
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