Tribulation

Tribulation

Coal,
compressed,
tested, stressed,
yields its concealed
beauty under protest.
A diamond heart, at last unsealed,
its softness transformed, its true strength revealed.
Life's adversity challenges us for control.
It leaves helpless feelings, no key to wield
against self-sold shackles well sealed
until deep in our chest
we find a shield
for our quest:
our blest
soul.

Notes

An entry for Round Twenty-One "Pond Poetry"  [ASR]

Prompt: Must use the words SOLD, LEAVES, KEY

Form: Diatelle
The Diatelle is a fun, syllable counting form like the etheree with a twist. The syllable structure of the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks best center aligned in a diamond shape.

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Ken