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It was a cold night; the kind of night that begged, no, demanded you stay inside. Despite the biting cold that awaited him, Elric knew he had to do it. He laced up his boots and threw on his winter jacket. It was now or never.
After giving the car time to warm up, Elric journeyed on to what would be the most important night of his life. "Lisa, will you marry me?" "Oh my God, Elric. This is so unexpected and...so soon." "I know Lisa, but love can't wait for reason." "Elric, we just started seeing each other two months ago. I...didn't think we were even exclusive. I've..." "You've been what Lisa?" "Well, I've been seeing someone else. I'm sorry. Maybe I should have told you, but..." Eric charged up the stairway. As he took each step higher, to the place that would change all for him, he patted his pocket for reassurance. Reason had faded into the frigid air. He peeked through the window, hoping he wouldn't be seen. Surprise was the element he needed most to accomplish his goal. His face relaxed and warmed as he noticed her walking out of the bedroom, wearing a silk robe. She looked gorgeous, her beauty almost sobering. Elric froze for a moment, not certain if he should do it. Apparently reason was not completely lost to him. He replayed the conversation over and over again in his mind. Perhaps things would turn out differently. Hope followed reason and Elric rapped on the door. At the same time, a shadow flowed out from the bedroom. "Elric! What are you doing here? Things are over between us." "You bitch!" He spat. "I loved you!" Elric reached into his pocket for his reassurance and pulled the trigger. Word count: 294
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