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Lessons Learned
Tag challenge Sedoka: prompt lesson learned
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Lessons Learned


One blundered attempt
Successfully ending life,
Teaches selfish collective
Uncertain lost minds.
Why interrogate for blame,
When this death can't be recalled?




The Sedoka is also a Japanese form. It consists out of six lines, with a syllable count.
The Sedoka is originally a musical poem…in Japanese they use to sing Sedoka’s.

How is the Sedoka built up?

1st line: 5 syllables
2nd line:7 syllables
3rd line: 7 syllables
4th line: 5 syllables
5th line: 7 syllables
6th line: 7 syllables





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