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Blue Beneath The Moon
You told me by the sea that afternoon this love was not to be. Thrusting your backstabbing harpoon- you burst the bubble of my heart's balloon and sold your love to a strange man you hardly knew. That night I sat beneath a cold gray moon, thoughts of love that ended too soon, a key she leaves me free love to attune, love for me shall be- blue. spb. Notes: The Diatelle form was created by Bradley Vrooman. The syllable structure of the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks best center aligned in a diamond shape. This was a tough challenge. Thank you for reading.
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