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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Friendship >> ID #1603460  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
To Briana
My friend asked that I write a poem about her. Review please:))
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Beauty is something very human.
Rarely does it show who we are.
Is that because we are secretive?
Are we supposed to hide what we feel?
Never do we share all we know.
At last the dawn arrives.

I hope life becomes better.
To feel pain, is to know pleasure.

Is the love in your heart unconditional?
Soft and sweet is the touch of a lover’s hand.

Grand is the visage of fate.
Over hill, and under hill we ride.
In the end, everything fades.
Nigh is the peak of sorrow.
Gouge out your fear.

Tear away your tears.
Obtuse are all emotions in this state.

Be one with your heart and mind.
Eternal peace can only be achieved through love and compassion.

Awesome is the power of imagination.
Laughter is pure as to invalidate all elements.
Rivers flow past you in your loveliest dreams.
I would do anything for you.
Given is my shoulder unto you.
High should be held your head.
Tonight, you shall dream of the sea.

Beyond the shore, is faith.
Rise up and stand tall.
Inglorious are those who wish to harm you.
Amend the pain and sorrow you withhold.
Night is not eternal, it will swiftly pass.
Always look to hope, do not trust in it, though.

Yonder, the sweet fragrance blows in.
Over high mountains and low valleys the wind comes.
Under oath, it swore to comfort you.

Around you, swells the scent of love.
Right you are, to ask of the origin.
Ever it is, however, that no such location exists.

Agreed we are, on the prospect.
Merry are all who ever live in your presence.
A feeling of voracity dwells in those wishing for your grace.
Zion is what defines your beauty.
It seems, to my eyes, that the world would be ugly in your absence.
Never would I wish to live in your memory.
Great it is, to call this brilliant beauty, my dearest friend.
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