Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Reviewer Items

More Reviewers  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Mentor
Presented To:
RogerC

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 325    
Guests: 2262    
   
Total Online Now: 2587    
Writing.Com Time

Tuesday
February 14, 2012
1:57am EST


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1604796  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Second Chance
Paper Doll Gang assignment...written in "The Huitain" form ( hard!)
Rated:
13+
by
Avg Rating: (13)


The form requirements for the Huitain are as follows: eight lines, with eight syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ababbcbc





Second Chance



A pure heart hurt and filled with pain
Handfuls of pills washed down with wine
Soul dying, she stands in the rain
Body reacting, showing signs
Harsh siren blares in nick of time
Prayers sent out help to heal her soul
Angels assist her upward climb
Renewed--now unbroken and whole

© Copyright 2009 Omni~pink bubbles r everywhere (UN: omniblueeyes at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Omni~pink bubbles r everywhere has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!