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| Second Chance Paper Doll Gang assignment...written in "The Huitain" form ( hard!)
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Created: 12:01pm on 10-03-2009
Modified: 8:07am on 10-31-2009 | |
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The form requirements for the Huitain are as follows: eight lines, with eight syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ababbcbc
Second Chance
A pure heart hurt and filled with pain
Handfuls of pills washed down with wine
Soul dying, she stands in the rain
Body reacting, showing signs
Harsh siren blares in nick of time
Prayers sent out help to heal her soul
Angels assist her upward climb
Renewed--now unbroken and whole
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