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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1605810  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Break uP
After a break up.
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You understood everything I ever said to you
I told you I loved you
You said you loved me too
You never once judged me
Or made me feel a freak
You were the only one I could talk to
The only one with whom I could speak
Then one day out of the blue
You turned to me and broke me heart in two
Said you couldn't be with me anymore
Then you turned and walked out the door
Now I'm all alone and you want to stay friends
But you just don't get it
I want my life to end
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