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Hi, I'm Dianne, known here at WDC as Di. I enjoyed your story, and I wanted to share my thoughts with you.
First Impressions Favorite Parts Suggestions As the writer, you are the only one who can determine what works best for your story. Please feel free to take any suggestions that work for you and ignore the rest. I really enjoyed your ideas, and I hope you will write more. Di-Back to school!    
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